After running the game, the game window appears, but after waiting for a few seconds, the music and screen lag and then it just shuts down for no reason.
I really haven't read very far yet (just until the end of the first meeting with Ali), but so far it seems pretty good.
The game could do with a proofread. There are a few simple misspellings (for example the place the MC gets assigned to is spelled in 3 different ways), titles and sometimes names are in lowercase, "and" often comes without a comma when there should be one, and vocative commas are missing most of the time. Also, there's a bunch of lines ending without punctuation.
I also think it would be neat if the MC could be named by the player, but maybe you have a reason to withhold that option?
Solid start to a game, the music is solid, the plot is interesting and has a lot of potential, the art is unique and makes it different from the other 3Dcg games in here and everything else is good. The only complain I have is the time it takes to change scenes, it takes like a solid second to change backgrounds and it un skippable the first time you see it, but other than that its a solid demo even if its like 10 minutes long.
Worth playing and I'm gonna wait and see how this turns out. Good luck dev.
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I think PC version doesn't work.
Can you post the error message your getting? Does the game crash or not start up for you?
After running the game, the game window appears, but after waiting for a few seconds, the music and screen lag and then it just shuts down for no reason.
In the games directory, can you find and post the results from the log.txt and the error.txt into the support page? https://civis-rasa.itch.io/in-the-shadow-of-v/devlog/713185/support
I really haven't read very far yet (just until the end of the first meeting with Ali), but so far it seems pretty good.
The game could do with a proofread. There are a few simple misspellings (for example the place the MC gets assigned to is spelled in 3 different ways), titles and sometimes names are in lowercase, "and" often comes without a comma when there should be one, and vocative commas are missing most of the time. Also, there's a bunch of lines ending without punctuation.
I also think it would be neat if the MC could be named by the player, but maybe you have a reason to withhold that option?
Anyway, I wish you good luck with the game.
Thank you for the feedback! I wasn't aware we still had some grammatical issues. But, we'll go through the scripts again and see what we find.
I've considered making the MC a nameable character in the past. I might allow players to change their name in a future update.
Solid start to a game, the music is solid, the plot is interesting and has a lot of potential, the art is unique and makes it different from the other 3Dcg games in here and everything else is good. The only complain I have is the time it takes to change scenes, it takes like a solid second to change backgrounds and it un skippable the first time you see it, but other than that its a solid demo even if its like 10 minutes long.
Worth playing and I'm gonna wait and see how this turns out. Good luck dev.